Step outline of our crime drama opening scene

We start of at filming 360 degrees pan of lonely woodland (show credits)
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Police officer is talking on his walkie talkie.
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Low angel of body (crime scene) with inspector in the background, we could see the crime investigation tape.
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Zoom in to the victim’s body and a XCU into the victim’s hand (blood)
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Blackout into flashback
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Victim is running she is trying to escape from the criminal. (We see this from the criminal’s point of view)
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Victim falls over a stone/branch.
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Blackout/blurred vision
(Sound effect of victim being stabbed)... (Scuffling of leaves)... (Hand held camera)
[Screaming sound of the girl, transition dissolves to zoom out of the hand still showing the blood]
[Cut to]
Pathologists arrive on the crime scene
[Shot reverse shot of pathologist to victim’s body]
Pathologist examining footprints and picking up key evidence and putting them into the bags
[Cut to]
Killer lurking in the background he is looking through branches at the crime scene.
[Rustling of the leaves]
Police hear the rustling. (They all look back to where the voice came from)
[Cut to]
Pathologist picks up key evidence and puts it in his pocket.